Post by brandi on Jun 8, 2006 12:07:23 GMT -5
Okay, before you ask, yes, Brandi is me. No, i look nothing like her although i wish i did. I couln't find a cool nobody name, therfore i go by my true name. Yes, i wrote more.
Chappie 1:
“Well, well, well.” Said a thingyy voice behind me. I turned and saw a tall guy who, like me, was dressed in the traditional black cloak of Organization XIII. His hair was red and spiky, and he had odd black marks under his eyes. “If it isn’t the fourteenth member of Organization XIII.” “So what if I am?” I snapped. He took another look at me. “Who are you anyway?” he asked. “Who wants to know?” I asked. He laughed. “I’m not telling.” Just then a younger blond boy, also in black cloak, ran up to him with a blue sitar in his hands. “Look, Axel, we gotta go! Dymex knows I have his sitar and he’s not …” By know he seemed to notice me. “Who’s that?” he asked. “Axel huh?” I said. He turned to the blonde boy. “Thanks Roxas.” He said. Turning back to me, he said “ Yeah. I’m Axel. Got it memorized? Now, are you gonna tell me who you are?” thingyy as ever I suppose. “May as well.” I said. Another blonde boy, again, in black cloak, ran up. He was taller than Roxas, but still shorter then Axel. “Roxas!” he bellowed. “Give it back!” Roxas took off running. The guy I assumed to be Dymex ran after him. “Hi new girl! Bye new girl!” he yelled as he ran past me. “Well, if you must know,” I said to Axel who was still looking at me expectantly. “my name’s Brandi.” Axel laughed. “Liar.” “What!” I yelled. “That’s not the name of a nobody.” He said. “Yeah, I know.” I said, curiously watching Dymex and Roxas who were still running around the castle courtyard wildly. “I go by my true name.” At this, everyone froze. Roxas dropped the sitar. Dymex absentmindedly picked it up. Everyone looked at me. The ever-vocal Axel broke the silence. “Why?” There wasn’t a trace of thingyiness in his voice. “Maybe,” I said, thinking deeply. “as a reminder of what was. So, I never forget, what it was like, to have a heart.” “That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard.” Roxas snorted. Seeing the anger in my eyes, Dymex jumped in. “Look,” he said. “we don’t want any trouble.” But it was too late. I had my weapon, Sword of the Dragon, in my hand and was in my stance. Dymex backed off. Even Axel backed away a little, but Roxas was at the ready with a white key like sword in his hand. “Roxas,” Dymex said. “let’s go. Please.” But he wouldn’t back off. Before I knew it, we erupted into battle. The kid was good, but I was better. Half way through the battle, he suddenly had two key-like swords. The second was black. “That’s no fair!” I yelled. But no one stopped. Even Dymex wouldn’t stop us. He just kept yelling “You two are gonna kill each other!” over and over, but no one cared. Axel just kept chanting “Go Roxas!” The battle turned. It’s hard to block two weapons when you only have one your self. “That’s it!” I screamed. I dropped my weapon. It disappeared before it hit the ground. I closed my ice blue eyes. My black curls whipped around my face. Deep in concentration, I hardly noticed Roxas’ blows had stopped. My feet were off the ground. For a moment, everything was still. Then, suddenly, I screamed, my eyes flew open, and I rushed to the ground. Everything seemed to explode and I had to shield my eyes. I unshielded my eyes. Although Dymex was still standing, Axel and Roxas were thrown up against a castle wall. Everything was wet. Dymex stared at me. “Your element’s water too?” he asked me. “Umm… yeah?” I replied. Coughing and sputtering, Roxas got up and slowly pulled a soaked Axel to his feet. “That could have killed me!” Axel roared. “What?” I said cluelessly. “Axel’s element is fire.” Dymex explained. “Oh. Sorry.” Axel was really mad. He was about ready to attack me when Roxas stopped him. “Axel.” he said. “What if we got to know Brandi better?” “Huh?” the three of us said in unison. “She almost killed us!” Axel roared. “But she didn’t.” Roxas said. I opened my mouth to say something, but Dymex gave me a warning look, so I shut it and said nothing. “Maybe Axel’s jealous, because Brandi can fight better than him.” Roxas teased. “What! No way!” Axel summoned his chakrams and was ready to leap into battle when I flicked water at him. “Do ya really wanna do that?” I asked. Deciding he didn’t, the chakrams vanished. “So,” Roxas said. “You gonna sit with us at the Organization meeting?” he asked. “We have a meeting?” I asked, again, clueless. “Yeah.” He said. “In the hall of empty melodies.” “Oh. Right.” I said. “But, don’t we have to sit by our numbers?” Roxas looked embarrassed. “Well, we did.” He said. Axel and Dymex burst out laughing. “Until Larxene nearly fried Roxas’ head off!” Axel laughed. “Okay! It wasn’t that funny!” Roxas said, tugging at a spike of hair with a particularly fried end. “Sure. We’re going to The Hall of Empty Melodies, right?” I asked. The guys nodded. “That’s kinda a funny name. Why do you call it that?” Now it was Axel and Roxas who were laughing. “Because.” Roxas laughed. “Xemnas banned music there after Dymex played his sitar.” We all laughed, except Dymex. “What?” he whined. “ A few bad notes and_” “The whole Organization jumped you!” Axel laughed. Now I was laughing. “Well. You two have had your moments.” I said. “What about you Axel?” Axel immediately stopped laughing, but Dymex and Roxas threw themselves into a fit of laughter. “ Well, there was that one time.” Roxas laughed. By now the two had tears coming out of their eyes. “Shut up!” Axel hissed, but Roxas kept going. “ When Axel got tackled by Larxene, and then he got his butt kicked.” By now, Roxas was laughing too hard to finish his story. “What did you do?” I asked Axel. He turned red and mumbled something. “What?” “He burnt out her whole wardrobe!” Dymex yelled. “Well, the plan was to make her really mad, having only one cloak and all.” Axel said, obviously still embarrassed. “How was I supposed to know the flame would still be in her room when she got there and catch the cloak she was wearing on fire too?” I joined Roxas and Dymex in laughing hysterically. Even Axel cracked a smile.
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Chappie 1:
“Well, well, well.” Said a thingyy voice behind me. I turned and saw a tall guy who, like me, was dressed in the traditional black cloak of Organization XIII. His hair was red and spiky, and he had odd black marks under his eyes. “If it isn’t the fourteenth member of Organization XIII.” “So what if I am?” I snapped. He took another look at me. “Who are you anyway?” he asked. “Who wants to know?” I asked. He laughed. “I’m not telling.” Just then a younger blond boy, also in black cloak, ran up to him with a blue sitar in his hands. “Look, Axel, we gotta go! Dymex knows I have his sitar and he’s not …” By know he seemed to notice me. “Who’s that?” he asked. “Axel huh?” I said. He turned to the blonde boy. “Thanks Roxas.” He said. Turning back to me, he said “ Yeah. I’m Axel. Got it memorized? Now, are you gonna tell me who you are?” thingyy as ever I suppose. “May as well.” I said. Another blonde boy, again, in black cloak, ran up. He was taller than Roxas, but still shorter then Axel. “Roxas!” he bellowed. “Give it back!” Roxas took off running. The guy I assumed to be Dymex ran after him. “Hi new girl! Bye new girl!” he yelled as he ran past me. “Well, if you must know,” I said to Axel who was still looking at me expectantly. “my name’s Brandi.” Axel laughed. “Liar.” “What!” I yelled. “That’s not the name of a nobody.” He said. “Yeah, I know.” I said, curiously watching Dymex and Roxas who were still running around the castle courtyard wildly. “I go by my true name.” At this, everyone froze. Roxas dropped the sitar. Dymex absentmindedly picked it up. Everyone looked at me. The ever-vocal Axel broke the silence. “Why?” There wasn’t a trace of thingyiness in his voice. “Maybe,” I said, thinking deeply. “as a reminder of what was. So, I never forget, what it was like, to have a heart.” “That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard.” Roxas snorted. Seeing the anger in my eyes, Dymex jumped in. “Look,” he said. “we don’t want any trouble.” But it was too late. I had my weapon, Sword of the Dragon, in my hand and was in my stance. Dymex backed off. Even Axel backed away a little, but Roxas was at the ready with a white key like sword in his hand. “Roxas,” Dymex said. “let’s go. Please.” But he wouldn’t back off. Before I knew it, we erupted into battle. The kid was good, but I was better. Half way through the battle, he suddenly had two key-like swords. The second was black. “That’s no fair!” I yelled. But no one stopped. Even Dymex wouldn’t stop us. He just kept yelling “You two are gonna kill each other!” over and over, but no one cared. Axel just kept chanting “Go Roxas!” The battle turned. It’s hard to block two weapons when you only have one your self. “That’s it!” I screamed. I dropped my weapon. It disappeared before it hit the ground. I closed my ice blue eyes. My black curls whipped around my face. Deep in concentration, I hardly noticed Roxas’ blows had stopped. My feet were off the ground. For a moment, everything was still. Then, suddenly, I screamed, my eyes flew open, and I rushed to the ground. Everything seemed to explode and I had to shield my eyes. I unshielded my eyes. Although Dymex was still standing, Axel and Roxas were thrown up against a castle wall. Everything was wet. Dymex stared at me. “Your element’s water too?” he asked me. “Umm… yeah?” I replied. Coughing and sputtering, Roxas got up and slowly pulled a soaked Axel to his feet. “That could have killed me!” Axel roared. “What?” I said cluelessly. “Axel’s element is fire.” Dymex explained. “Oh. Sorry.” Axel was really mad. He was about ready to attack me when Roxas stopped him. “Axel.” he said. “What if we got to know Brandi better?” “Huh?” the three of us said in unison. “She almost killed us!” Axel roared. “But she didn’t.” Roxas said. I opened my mouth to say something, but Dymex gave me a warning look, so I shut it and said nothing. “Maybe Axel’s jealous, because Brandi can fight better than him.” Roxas teased. “What! No way!” Axel summoned his chakrams and was ready to leap into battle when I flicked water at him. “Do ya really wanna do that?” I asked. Deciding he didn’t, the chakrams vanished. “So,” Roxas said. “You gonna sit with us at the Organization meeting?” he asked. “We have a meeting?” I asked, again, clueless. “Yeah.” He said. “In the hall of empty melodies.” “Oh. Right.” I said. “But, don’t we have to sit by our numbers?” Roxas looked embarrassed. “Well, we did.” He said. Axel and Dymex burst out laughing. “Until Larxene nearly fried Roxas’ head off!” Axel laughed. “Okay! It wasn’t that funny!” Roxas said, tugging at a spike of hair with a particularly fried end. “Sure. We’re going to The Hall of Empty Melodies, right?” I asked. The guys nodded. “That’s kinda a funny name. Why do you call it that?” Now it was Axel and Roxas who were laughing. “Because.” Roxas laughed. “Xemnas banned music there after Dymex played his sitar.” We all laughed, except Dymex. “What?” he whined. “ A few bad notes and_” “The whole Organization jumped you!” Axel laughed. Now I was laughing. “Well. You two have had your moments.” I said. “What about you Axel?” Axel immediately stopped laughing, but Dymex and Roxas threw themselves into a fit of laughter. “ Well, there was that one time.” Roxas laughed. By now the two had tears coming out of their eyes. “Shut up!” Axel hissed, but Roxas kept going. “ When Axel got tackled by Larxene, and then he got his butt kicked.” By now, Roxas was laughing too hard to finish his story. “What did you do?” I asked Axel. He turned red and mumbled something. “What?” “He burnt out her whole wardrobe!” Dymex yelled. “Well, the plan was to make her really mad, having only one cloak and all.” Axel said, obviously still embarrassed. “How was I supposed to know the flame would still be in her room when she got there and catch the cloak she was wearing on fire too?” I joined Roxas and Dymex in laughing hysterically. Even Axel cracked a smile.
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