another poem of mine

[Leon's girl]

Death
by soraskhgirl

death can be a scary thing as we all know
but death isn't all about sorrow
some good things can be shown

though your loved one is no longer with you
they left a few things behind
like marks in your heart and memories in your mind

death can do alot of things like tear a family apart
but one thing death cannot tear apart
is the love engraved in your heart

the loved ones thoughts and words will never be forgot
because your loved one never left you
their spritie is in your heart

death can be a scary thing but i am not afraid
because the darkness has turned to light
brighting up my way

[Leon's girl]

sooo what do you guys think of my poem??

[Leon's girl]

hello anyone like my poem???

[Lani]

I do!

[riku4ever]

i kinda but its diffrent from alot of others

[lani]

Ish awsome.
^^

[Ember]

It's cool. I just don't like to think much about Death. It's scary!!!! (screams)

[Yuffie]

Death ish uber-ly scary.
But the poem rawked.

[Rose]

Yeah.

[br14]

*claps like mad*
O-o;;

[Yuffie]

-claps because clapping is fun-

[superjerry20]

Death doesn't scare me. Death is inevitable, so why be afraid of it? Just cherish what you have while you have it, and cherish your memories of it once it's gone.

[Yuffie]

And eat dounuts.
Dunkin Dounuts.

Death accually scares me...
Like, how I'm going to die...
-shudders-

[br14]

Hey, after death comes heaven.

[Raven]

I'm scared of dying before my friends, and dying after them. It is odd, but the prospect terrifies me. Like, I don't wan't them to be sad when I die, but I don't want to die before/after them.